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The tears well up,
They start to cry,
The strength inside you,
Has become a lie.

Bleeding hearts,
Fulfilled with pain,
For this loss,
It has no gain.

Confusion tearing,
Limb by limb,
Bloody tears drown you,
You struggle to swim.

Try and try to win it back,
But fail and fail again,
The stabbing in your heart,
Is spreading to your brain.

The blood flowing rivers,
Bursting all their sides,
The heart pumping fast,
Vessels bursting in your eyes.

The anger and depression,
The confusion and mistrust,
Build up lethally inside you,
Like a virused skin of puss.

The heartache ever lasting,
Your stomach knots and twists,
The only way to escape this heartache,
Is a pair of bloody wrists.
©2006-2009 ~theredrebel
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A poem about the feelings and thoughts of a recently heartbroken person

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:iconkimmyboi:
WOW so emotional.....i have friend who is like that now......*sigh*

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Sometimes it's alright to fear but when it's time for you to stop you just can't
:iconbee9:
I'm heartbroken.....but I promised myself to not go that far.

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The spiders want me to tap dance! I dont wanna tap dance!!!!
:iconi-am-a-weasal:
yeah you're really talented. You have a way with words. I an relate to that feeling.
:iconpsycoelf:
I'm going through this feeling right now... At least I know it isn't abnormal...

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When life hands you lemons... Forget it. How many people try to tell you what to do with YOUR lemons?! Just do whatever with your dang lemons, I don't care anymore.
:iconsabaku-luv:
hmm...seems like how im feeling...good job.

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♥The wound that cannot be healed, shines forth from your white chest. I'll gouge into it more deeply for you♥

<Sabaku-luv> I should get an outline of the world across my ass
<Ayame00151> XD
<Sabaku-luv> THERE'S A CANYON IN THE ATLANTIC OCEAN
:iconrobingraysonismine:
I agree with Bee9.
this is almost exactly what I'm feeling, but I wouldn't go that far, either.

this is a wonderful poem.
conveys the right emotions perfectly.
:iconnarutofreak-oo:
Great poem.. </3

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ahahahaha... AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA AAHHAHAHAHAHA !!
- no i'm not insane. i just need food ...

I LIEK YAOI, FOOD, AND MUSIC : DD that's the reason for why I still live.
:iconrose-dust:
I love it..*sniffle*I'm heart broken too ... :hug:

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Don't play stupid with me. . .I'm MUCH better at it! ;D
"Dev FAQ # 3345: "How can I earn PageViews easily?"
:icondarkest-illusion:
I don't know if I should be heartbroken or not. I have yet to be clued into WHAT my "relationship" is...but so far, I'm mostly feeling heartache.

You wrote this VERY well!

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"LOVE ISN'T BRAINS CHILDREN. IT'S BLOOD! BLOOD SCREAMING INSIDE YOU TO WORK IT'S WILL. I MAY BE LOVE'S BITCH, BUT AT LEAST I'M MAN ENOUGH TO ADMIT IT!" - Spike from Buffy the Vampire Slayer

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